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Fragile Heart
Author: Everett

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A Fragile Heart bleeds through its surface.
The same fragile heart that gets broken.
More often broken by the ones we Love.
Or by the ones we thought we Loved.
The shattered peices of a broken heart
will bury thier way into our soul.
They are reminders of broken trust.
Its hard to trust the right people.
So many times we let others
hold our fragile heart and soul in thier clumsy hands.
Words like "care" "love" and "miss" mislead us from the truth
that they have already dropped our heart.
It falls to the ground and breaks into so many peices
that we must somehow put back together.
Its a lonely puzzle that will, in time, be finished.
Moving on is tough, it will always be rough.
Soon you will find that inside every one of us is strength.
I know......because i found it today.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Elizabetta (198.81.26.204) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 03:57 am

:)

Beautiful..all too true, hurt over and over but we must go back for more. I love that your poem ends on a note of hope, and I'm glad that you found it!
Kristy (12.96.223.182) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 03:31 pm

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Excellent poem. Keep writing.
everett (209.240.198.62) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 04:42 pm

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Thanks Elizabetta and Kristy. :)
im glad you liked it. yeah it ends on a note of hope, which was the best way to end it. Thanks again
Pamela (66.38.146.118) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 12:45 am

Ooooooh

I LOVE the line "so many times we allow others to hold our heart and soul in their clumsy hands...."
Wow.
Way to personify wrecklessness in relationships.
Did I say wow?
everett (209.240.198.62) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 04:57 am

lol

yeah i believe you did say wow.... WoW! Thanks! :)
jazmine (150.176.64.137) -- Monday, January 27 2003, 03:23 pm

heartbreak

you have to belive you can make love work,or it won't last.not even the stongestlove!
Tammy (66.38.4.92) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 06:10 am

WOW

I loved this poem....beautiful, I am still reading.
I am truely addicted. I love all of your poems I have read. Every one of your poems needs an awesome comment. I love poetry that grabs the heart...So heres a comment on each and everyone of your beautiful, and talented poems. Awesome, Amazing, with beauty, and grace, and WOW....WOW....WOW... Sorry got caught up on the moment!!!!!!!
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 06:24 am

kind words

Wow tammy, Thank you very much. im really glad you like my poetry cause i really like yours as well! your words inspire me to keep writing... thank you Tammy!! :)
 
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