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I Saw You
Author: Everett

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I saw you from the streetlight.
The light was red but all i saw was you.
I saw you on the bench, waiting for a ride.
You saw me and gave me a smile,
a smile that seemed to heal this bruised heart.
We made eye contact, everything stood still.
I saw a glimpse of us running through the rain, laughing.
We talked as if we knew eachther for years.
we told eachother our deepest fears.
Bt i was snapped iback into reality when i realized we are nothing more
than distant strangers.
I saw you sitting there, looking my way.
Nothing to say.
I saw someone approach you.
I saw you stand up and kiss him.
The light turned green as i just smiled and drove off

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.96.6) -- Friday, January 17 2003, 07:36 pm

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Oooo...i liked that one Everett. I find it unique with tha traffic light thrown in there and all.
everett (209.240.198.61) -- Saturday, January 18 2003, 02:13 am

Thank Ya

yeah, this kinda did happen to me, sorta lol. i was at a stop light and saw a girl there but that was it. when i got home i used my imagantion and wrote this.
Pamela (66.38.146.109) -- Saturday, January 18 2003, 05:54 pm

Mysterious

Sometimes mysterious things happen to us and we never shake those moments. Very haunting when you look into a stranger's eyes and feel as if you've known them for years.
Beautifully written.
everett (209.240.198.61) -- Saturday, January 18 2003, 06:28 pm

:)

Thank you Pamela
 
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