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Time
Author: Everett

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I once knew a time when the grass was green and the sky was blue
Now the grass is replaced with a bloody ground and a dark sky.
The sky above turned black when you stabbed me in the back.
My blood soaked tears fall to the ground i stand on.
I once knew a time when everyday was bright and i had a smile on my
face.
Now my smile is lost in time.
My bright days were taken away.
Bright days turned into rainy nights.
When did things start to go wrong?
Im soaked from the rain.
Im soaked from the blood caused from this knife in my back.
Betrayed by life.
Betrayed by my own self.
I once knew a time when i was happy.
I reach back and pull out this knife i've held onto for so long.
Maybe now i can find my place in time.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (152.163.188.40) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 08:32 pm

awesome!

Wow, Everett..that was awesome. I really liked the last two lines! Good one Everett!
everett (209.240.198.63) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 09:45 pm

Thanks

Im glad you liked it! Thanks again :)
Luc (67.36.185.11) -- Wednesday, January 15 2003, 04:32 am


like linzat already said those last two lines where really good.. a nice touch to the rest of the poem which is really good.. i like your writing even though i might not write a lot of comments but i read them and i like 'em a lot.. just wanted you to know :)
everett (209.240.198.63) -- Wednesday, January 15 2003, 05:12 pm


Hey thanks Luc, I appreciate that. I read and like all your writing too
 
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