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Miles Away
Author: Everett

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A new year will soon begin.
still miles away.
Riding Phonelines to each other's Voice.
Making new plans for the "future"
I wait days to hear from you.
where are you?
You tell me not to worry,
Well im sorry, I have and i am.
One day I will ask you....
"Will we ever be able to look into each other's eyes?"
Its so hard to do from this lonely place.
Another year of trying my patience has
passed.
I honestly dont know how much longer it will
last. waiting for the phone to ring, minutes...hours pass.
why do i torture myself by waiting?
This isnt where i want to be! but what
can i do?
I'll be here waiting, like i always am.
I'll be here when you get back.
Maybe one day i wont be..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.189.27) -- Saturday, January 4 2003, 03:28 am

that last line

kinda hit me there.. so sad.. almost cry a tear.. 0.o er yeah.. (didnt say that hehe) beautiful poem.. i sad but pretty..
everett (209.240.198.60) -- Saturday, January 4 2003, 07:33 pm

thanks

yeah it is a bit saddening isnt it?
LindsAy (205.188.208.104) -- Sunday, January 5 2003, 02:20 am

Everett!!!!

Hey Everett!! It's Lindsay....from webtv. My new addy is <snip> (no addys allowed). I dont get on much though.........awesome poem by the way my friend!
LindsAy (205.188.208.104) -- Sunday, January 5 2003, 05:37 pm

Hi

Dang it...no addys allowed. Hmm....... Well, miss ya Everett!
everett (209.240.198.60) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 02:33 am

Lindsay!!

hey! its good to see ya again! i got your addy so i emailed ya...and thanks about the poem..
LinzAy (64.12.96.44) -- Saturday, January 11 2003, 10:50 am

:)

Hehe.......um, ur welcome about the poem! :) and as u know..i got ur email!! hehe...lyl
 
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