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A Mental Lock
17 April, 2019
Author: Mental

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Mental box
Mental square
The inside darkness
Is a real nightmare.
Cutting parts
That you think exist
But I still feel them
And I can't resist.
Mental action
I am lost
But, to my satisfaction
I pay the cost.
A mental lock
That I can't pick
But I have to do it
Because inside it's going tick, tick, tick.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Raibow (172.58.158.234) -- Sunday, August 30 2020, 05:17 am

About to go

Dont explode,nice feeling here
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Sunday, August 30 2020, 08:33 pm

don't give up

Mental don't give up when bad thoughts try to think of positive things I've had the tumour 21 years ago i'm in a wheelchair but I still go to bingo I go down and sit on my scooter to watch the horses being exercised. no license anymore no job and my speech sucks but I have food a roof over my head and socialise with the people at bingo. I have a good life,bad days but mostly good.so don't give in keep plugging along.
Mental (172.58.155.2) -- Sunday, August 30 2020, 11:24 pm

To barb

Thank you for ecouragement. But some days , you know. I take prozac but sometimes it does not agree with me. Thank you for caring.
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Monday, August 31 2020, 03:37 am

i take anti depressant

oh I know sometimes they work good and other times not but when they do help boy they really work. the worse thing you can do is get down low build yourself back up and live damn it ha
barb (66.103.47.14) -- Thursday, September 3 2020, 05:46 pm

HARD I KNOW

FOR 20 YEARS I HAVEN'T HAD A JOB A CAR LICENSE IT FRUSTRATES ME SOMEDAYS NOTHING WE CAN DO BUT MAKE THE BEST OF IT EH HA.
Mental (172.58.158.198) -- Friday, September 4 2020, 01:32 am

To barb

That is true
 
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