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I Feel Stupid
Author: Ashley

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I feel stupid but im somewhat catching on
I feel angusish; many has done me wrong
I don't care to know about the little
but major things that I do without
when these feelings an or emotions are bound

I feel less than
subtracting my pride
I encounter everyting but happiness
no need to ask why
I feel stupid
too stupid to cry
too stupid to laugh If only I sigh
I feel sorry
my apology lasts forever
i feel stupid
regret always stop never

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (68.74.74.207) -- Friday, January 24 2003, 06:42 am


nice i like. i like that line "too stupid to laugh if only i sigh" i liked the way it just comes out. nice poem. :)
Ashley (24.143.29.45) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 12:00 am

Well thank you

Thanks
Ashley (68.72.95.239) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 04:17 am

I feel stupid as well

Well, I'd like to say that my name is Ashley too. And I have almost your exact same feelings on your poem entitled I feel Stupid. You really reached out to me and spoke of things that I couldn't say myself and have kept inside all these years. I really appreciate your writing and I hope your wings take you far in life. God bless
Lindsay (68.72.95.239) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 04:19 am

I disagree

God has given us all wings to fly, and we will not get far with the attitude of 'I Feel Stupid.' Do you use your wings, or do you crawl? God gave them to you, you should use them. Not complain. I feel that your poem is what is wrong with society today. May you find your wings and everything else you dream of. Pray to God.
Theresa (68.72.95.239) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 04:22 am

I see both points

As I agree with Lindsay, I have these incredibly stupid moments. I wish I could be as brave as you to put them out in the open. So Ashley and Ashley, don't worry I am stupid too. But I decided to look beyond like Lindsay has, and I hope you spread your wings and fly with me someday. I really hope you get over your stupidity. May God watch over you!!
ASHLEY (208.180.90.100) -- Thursday, October 30 2003, 03:24 pm

INDIFFERENT?

THIS IS JUST THE WAY I FEEL SOMETIMES. I THINK THAT WE ALL FEEL THIS WAY AT SOME POINT IN OUR LIVES WHEN WE FEEL LIKE WE'VE DONE SOMETHING WRONG
Megan T. (64.12.96.45) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 04:30 pm

Don't feel stupid Ashley

It sounds like you are past depression. I know sometimes we do something we might regret, but you can always pick up the pieces, and keep going. Don't forget to apologize though.
Maeve (15.203.169.70) -- Saturday, March 13 2004, 05:55 pm

Great poem..

I love this poem especially the first line, which is exactly how I feel. And it helps to know that someone else understands..
barb (66.46.230.205) -- Monday, March 15 2004, 10:35 pm

hmmm

your writing is good so you can't be to stupid. one thing I found out over the years is one good thing about being stupid is there is no pressure. people don't expect much from us :) and with being stupid it makes others that aren't feel smarter than us.
 
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