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First And Last
16 December, 2003
Author: Forgotton Sorrows

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The thoughts
The hurt
The lies
The pain
All gone in a second.
I saw your face again.
Knew everything would be okay.
Thought so.
But you did it again.
Starting not being around
Suspicion grew
I asked. You denied
As usual
How did I do this again?
How cold I believe it?
You'll never change.
Let down again.. I'll be okay.
Im sure. But I wont take it anymore
For you were my first love
and you will be my last love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (208.254.109.28) -- Wednesday, December 17 2003, 09:36 pm

pain

i know what you mean, this happened to me too. very good poem. keep up the good work.
ym (205.213.111.54) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 04:25 pm

Painfully perfect

Your words are so true, so full of pain. You capture your thoughts and feelings profoundly in this piece, it's Painfully Perfect.
 
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