Raped
11 January, 2003
Author: Ashley
Laying on my back; the floor on the side of a bed
on my knees again crying out for help
continuously confused in a minor would have crept;
crept through the door of illusion;
she knew it would never happen
so she lay on this floor;
her pumpkin not pumping but tapping;
feeling filthy but not looking filthy;
no one understands
tiny sediments of rock converted into sand
taging along as if nothings wrong;
stranded in a blank state;
can't help but to hesitate;
trying to move in a stiffened body
and explaining this to someone who can't relate.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LUC (67.37.228.68) -- Monday, January 13 2003, 02:56 am ...... well.. mmhmm.. BRAVO its just .. gaw cant find the right words to put how i feel about this.. its just ... blah i'll post up again when i find the right words .. heh good poem in the mean time :P :) keep on writing |
| julia (80.138.53.188) -- Saturday, January 18 2003, 09:03 pm i can relate ive been there before... and back again |
| kirsti davies (193.132.194.201) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 10:32 am i have been through the same thing . when i go out i am in so much fear incase something like that happens again to me. |
| Theresa, Ashley and Lindsay (68.72.95.239) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 05:26 am As far as my apoligies go, they all go out to you. I have pain in my heart for you and all who have gone through that terrible thing. How God could let such a thing happen, is beyond me. But you must remember, just because this happened, you still have your wings. It may be hard, but you need to remember to fly. You will fly with us all. May all happiness come your way and you never face such a thing again. God bless and watch over you. |
| ~*tHaLiYAh*~ (203.220.103.39) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 02:56 am Wellz gurl ive been there 2 it aint nice at all....i cant even walk down da shop by myself coz dats how it happened last tyme im just way 2 scared.....but i hope u are starting 2 feel betta now.... N 9 months lata i ended up wit a babi boi i called hym Tyrese (snip) |
| Shydelle (203.221.247.172) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 03:03 am hey gurl u aiight yehwell its appined 2 me 2 its every gurls worst nitemare......and especially wen u end up wit hes babi gurl nine months lata i called her Talea.....shes soo beautiful.....but i waznt ready 2 ave a babi i waz onli 14 wen i gave birth.....even tho i ave stayed strong its really hard but i ave all da support dat i cood ask 4 i just wasnt ready.....but n e wayz my gurl stay strong n keep ya head up tall n dont let hym get 2 u....act lyke hes not hurtin u dont give hym da satisfaction of hurting n aiight Luvin ya always SHYDELLE |
| Ashley (208.180.90.100) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 09:19 pm I appreciate all the comments and concerns. Thank yall for being thoughtful I'm glad to know i'm not the only one |
| Amanda Steder (172.20.70.27, 1) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 09:54 pm I feel really bad for you. I have been through it many times. I really hope that you get through this, and that you know that everything will be alright. If you ever wanna talk, ill be here, and you can count on me to help. Your buddy, Amanda |
| punkrocker04 (216.56.22.34) -- Tuesday, February 3 2004, 09:35 pm iknow exactly how you feel. you aren't alone. i guess that that i all i can say. I guess that if you ever need any1 to talk to i'll be here. (s (snipped-sent privately) peace and love punkrocker |
| Tricia (65.161.76.112) -- Sunday, February 8 2004, 06:33 pm Just like everyone else who has commented to this poem. I have been threw this. Only a few ppl know about it, I have kept it a secret pretty much my whole life. Then i meet the man i call my husband, i had to tell him i just couldnt bear it anymore. when you find that certain someone they will understand and help you threw it. So keep your head up, and for you that have a child from it, i look up to you and respect you. Thanks for sharing this poem ashley you are a great writer keep it up. Tricia |
| Ashley (208.180.90.100) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 03:37 pm Ya'll are so caring. Thanks |
| ~*!ToRrEy!*~ (205.188.116.84) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 12:11 am I know what you mean. I hate this feeling of being dirty when your not. Yet still you feel violated. |
| angel (10.4.137.59) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 12:35 pm i know uv got lots f support from loadz of people but i really jus wanted 2 say hang in there and i think your poems re brill and i cn really relate to em. |
| kelly (10.4.137.59) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 01:21 pm sorry to hear about that,whoever did this to you needs to get their head sorted |
| hailey (66.41.172.202) -- Friday, December 24 2004, 09:47 pm i am so sorry to hear that happined to you it just breaks my heart to hear there are guys out there like that and that it happined to you....it happined to me and i told my friend now i am going to court soon i've been scarred cause now he is threating to kill me...i just hate to hear cause you are prob. very sweet...to hear that you got hurt like that OH AM I SO VERY SORRY HUNNY!!*!*!*!*good luck in the future with guys... |
| hailey (66.41.172.202) -- Friday, December 24 2004, 09:55 pm also i just wanted to say it is a nightmare that you won't forget but stay strong!!!theres a guy out there that will treat you right.... |
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