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You Can't
21 April, 2003
Author: Ghost

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You can't do both Ashley
You can't dance and ride horses
You have to choose between the two
So, until you do,
Take care of my horses as well as yours
You worthless girl
I buy you nice things but they aren't good enough.
You ungrateful person.

You can't have both Ashley
You can't have a boyfriend and ride horses
There's no way to juggle school, riding and love.
You have no time to do anything else.
We only tell you this because we love you
We don't want to see you stretched too thin.
We will regulate everything you do.

You can't tell me wha I have time for.
You can't tell me I'm worthless
Then say you love me
You can't keep hiding behind my father
You can't keep doing drugs to ease the pain.
You can't laugh at me when I'm down
And all you've told me my whole life is that I can't

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Roy (152.163.188.227) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 02:07 pm

Family or Friend

I have said many of the words you have said when my daughter was 14 thru h. school I doubt that any of my word took effect until then with great efforts to support her but now she has a family of three and a high $ job and I'm there for her everyday and she makes me proud. Thanks for the words you shared as there maybe more to come with the tricks of life
LinzAy (205.188.208.137) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 03:02 pm

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Striking......good writing Ghost!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 05:18 pm

Very nice!

I am so sorry this happened to you . Things will get better! NIce poem!
Angelina (65.58.125.62) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 11:52 pm

Ashley...YOU CAN!!!!

You can. You can. You can.
That's all I have to say about that!
Nice work sweetie. Keep it up!
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Wednesday, April 23 2003, 12:33 am

To Ghost

If only parents would listen......

What a beautiful poem. I look forward to reading more.
Ghost (198.81.26.7) -- Wednesday, April 23 2003, 01:36 am

thanks

Thanks everyone for your kind words. It's nice to hear people say that I can do something instead of telling me that I can't.
Tarna (63.65.186.92) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 05:40 am

Say what they will

No Matter what they say remember you know the truth.. You CAN!!!
 
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