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Are You There
Author: Haley

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Needing to feel your touch
I don't
Reaching out, Only to grasp the air
Sleepless nights, so many now,
Lost count
A warmth rushes thru my body,
Are you there?
Is that your fingers I thought I just felt,
Stroking through my hair?
Will you come to me each night,
Helping me thru all of this despair?
Do you know how much I miss you?
Mother, are you there?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Kay (13) (63.65.188.132) -- Sunday, January 12 2003, 07:01 am

Mother are you there?

i thought that your poem was great! i recently lost my mum who was 31. She died instantly and i didnt see it coming so i guess it was a bit of a shock. I loved her with all my heart and your poem is going to be put over her grave in a letter. It describes how i feel
Kay (13)
lisa (68.32.186.89) -- Saturday, January 3 2004, 03:42 am

wow

powerfully written nice work very moving
 
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