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You Said
14 January, 2004
Author: Heaven

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you said no matter what our love would last forever,but wher are you now?why arent we together?why did you leave me here to go with another?

you said no matter what,itll only be me and you,but now i know you never was so true,

you said that its a fact,youll never make me cry,but that was not the truth `cause you left me here to die,

you said we`d stay together and NEVER be apart,but the only thing to show for your words is the giant whole in my heart,

you said you`d love me no matter what,but now the facts are youve really gone,

you said "together" even after life,but through all that youve you`ve said now you only say "goodbye".

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Comments on this poem/writing:

crystal (208.254.109.28) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 06:59 pm

betrayed

i can relate alot to this poem. i feel your pain cause i to feel betrayed. love sucks!
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:30 am

yes it does

im glad u can relate love does suck
Rick (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:58 am

Hey

Hey I'm Sorry!!! about everything .I wish I could repay you on what I did but I can't.I made a big fool
out of myself and I wish I had never done this and said the truth but I couldn't.I'm truly sorry!!! and
I still love you.But I can't be with you cuz of what
I did Sorry!! and that was a really good poem.
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:00 am

rick

im glad u could take tha time 2 read this and understood how i feel and i love u very much 2.ur a really good friend .thanx alot-heaven-
lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:31 am

love sucks

hey i feel your pain .love sucks
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 02:36 am

lester

im glad u agree thanx alot for the support.
xx (172.169.33.99) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 05:44 am

no title

good poem
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:43 pm

xx,

thanx alot-heaven
Chris (67.74.66.176) -- Wednesday, March 10 2004, 01:36 am

i too

i too know what you went through to b able to write that, iv been hurt so many times in "love" but thats why we live another day, to move on,.....awsome job heaven, love yah- chris
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 11 2004, 12:04 am

chris

thanx alot and i'm sorry about ur heartbreak:(but we all go through it i guess....thanx alot for the words...love-heaven
will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 10:54 pm

same here heaven awesome

loved it.
 
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