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My Mom
Author: Heaven

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dear mom,
you once was my hero,my savior,my friend,you were the one i went to when i was angry or sad.

you were the one that made me smile all the time,you wher the one that made everything alright.

you once was was the one that wiped away my tears,the one that could always earase all my fears,

you once was my mother,the srongest women i knew,you held your head high when you felt the lowest of low,

but through your life struggle i guess you gave up,`cause you left me alone and found your happiness in drugs,

i remember a time when you would always say "i love you my girl,what a beautiful women you will be,ill always be proud of you,your every thing a daughter should be,"then you would look in my eyes and quickly walk away...

you walked away forever,and left me in the dark,will i ever see you again?you tore a whole in my heart,i never thought you would be the one to tare are family apart,

at night in the shadows i can see your face.its happy and young,with eyes full of peace,its the face i use to see before you decided to leave,

i miss you mom,and this is the truth,i hope to see you again one day,and i hope this day is soon.
because
its hard to smile without you,its hard to hold back my tears,its hard to stay strong when you wont chase away my fears,its hard to believe your proud of me,when you are no longer here...

but most of all its hard for me to admit;sadly,that forever because of you ill have to live with out a family...

------- Author's Notes -------

this is the truth about my mother

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.208.254) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 05:51 pm

Heaven ...

oh wow..this is sooo tearfully sad and very deep...i hope your mom finds help w/her addiction....
the love of family can move mountains...do not give up sweetie..your a greatful daughter..she needs to know that...i'm proud of you and i'm sure your mom is too...Good luck and God Bless!!! Terrie*
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 01:42 am

thanx

wow.thanx alot.i never even thought that ne 1 would care enough about my sorry life to write ne thing like that.but i do thank u.-heaven-
Tammy (66.38.6.136) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 05:02 am

So Sad....

This is very sad...I can truely relate with what your going through. But you are strong, and I know things will work out for you, Your mother will find her way, your a very good writer, keep writing, I will keep reading. Thanks for your comments on my poem. I truely needed them. May the angels always be at your side in everystep you take forwards
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, February 16 2004, 03:22 am

tammy

thank u very much.those are the first words about angels iv gotten in a while.thanx again.-heaven-
Mark (66.75.77.195) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:23 am

Wow

Hey wow what a poem that was a good poem.
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:34 am

thanx rick-mark

thanx alot-heaven
lester (208.54.197.118) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:36 am

great heaven

hey i know where you are coming from on this poem my mom left me when i was1
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 01:37 am

lester

im sry 2 hear that.i got love 4 u tho.ok?and if u need 2 talk sum tym then im always here.ok?
Sara (24.11.118.59) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 10:28 pm

Heaven.....

U r the best u made me almost cry again man i luved it
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Saturday, February 28 2004, 10:30 pm

sara

thanx alot im glad u liked it.i wanna right stuff that people can realate to and understand.i wanna touch some one with my thoughts and words.so im glad that i did that for you.-heaven
xx (64.12.116.198) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 02:02 am

no title

wow
heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 01:05 am

thanx xx

thank you xx...
will (69.148.134.233) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 09:46 pm

no title

awesome
heaven (12.169.232.239) -- Saturday, November 26 2005, 06:42 pm

........update........on my mother

i am now living with my mom(for those of u who didnt know,i was living with my grandmother and others for some time.)i have been living with my mother for a year and everything is alot better.i want to truelly and honesyly thank all of you...well,to thank everyone that has ever commented on any of my poems,for u people you strangers are the ones that gave me faith and the will to go on...i use to wake up just to read my comments....thank u all....i will never forget any of you...you were all my angels.thank you so much.
darin weilert (69.129.54.250) -- Saturday, September 23 2006, 04:06 am

love it

this is a tear dropper poem everyone living child should be touched by. i would to have a copy of this loving poem, with your permission.
BARB (67.58.200.147) -- Sunday, September 24 2006, 05:42 pm

GOOD WRITE

YOU SHOULD SOMEHOW GET THIS TO YOUR MOTHER,I'm sure after she reads this she'll realize how you hurt over her decisions. keep writing your feelings out, it's good for you.
marie (72.68.180.214) -- Tuesday, December 12 2006, 12:20 am

please

this is such a great poem cam i please copy it
heaven (208.182.196.194) -- Tuesday, December 4 2007, 05:45 pm

sorry so long.....

but yes marie u may copy.
 
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