A Life
Author: Ashley R


A life, a story
a sister, a friend
I still dont know why
your life had to end.

As you would walk by
I would inhale your scent
That juicy gum
I think the flavor was mint.

Angels have no thoughts of ever returning you
Would they be angry if i thought of joining you?

Eternity, uncertainty.
I think i'm losing my sanity

Life is like a bumpy ride,
but why did you have to get off
And choose to suicide...


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 03:16 am


this is beautifully written w/alot of strength of emotion from your really saddens me to know how you lost you sister/your friend...death is always so unreal..especially when a loved one chooses to check out like heart goes out to you...may you find comfort in the memories you both built together... may your sisters spirit find the peace in her slumber...she was trying to find during her waking hours...God BlessYou..
Ashley R. ( -- Sunday, October 19 2003, 03:50 pm


Thanx alot. She wasn't really my sister, but a very close firned. Her name is Briitany, and she has been thorugh alot of stuff in her life. She is still alive, thank God! But she tried to kill herself, but was not successful. She still slits her wrists, but i'm trying to bring her out of her depression mood right now. So thanx
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