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Life
Author: Ashley Worlow

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I sit here and think about a wonderful life
And if I should I stab myself with a knife.
I'm not ready for death, but a better tomorrow
will I be happy? or have lots of sorrow?
I don't need pitty from those who are well,
I just want advice so I don't burn in Hell!
should I live another descusting, horrible day.
Or have my parents tell everyone I past away.
I sit here and think about a horrible death,
And if I should want to breath my last breath

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Comments on this poem/writing:

JIM (64.12.96.40) -- Thursday, January 2 2003, 08:30 pm

SAD

Hey Ash, i hope you don't really feel this way and not just because it is sad. I hope you realize that there are better things to come in your life because nothing ever stays the same--times change. And as we get older, we change and grow and understand the world in a much better light. Hang in there! Peace out!!
Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Friday, January 3 2003, 01:00 pm

Hang in there

I agree with Jim, a lot of people have felt as you do.....know I have!....but when you hit rock bottom the only way is up. Please give it a try and hang in there. Why not join us on the forum and share your problems.It's helped me to cope with my problems in life. Please give us a try!!

Jim...you sound like a nice person...would you like to join the forum too?
jim (64.12.96.40) -- Friday, January 3 2003, 05:32 pm

forum

cap, wat forum?
LUc (67.37.189.27) -- Saturday, January 4 2003, 03:44 am


the sites forums.. 0.o ... i can diffinite relate to that poem.. even though it seems impossibal to reach back up after you hit rock bottom.. remember.. nothing is impossibal just improbably in other words.. it'll be very hard but doable..^.^ like that story.. which i so love much (Yes im still a kid!) "the little engine that could..i think i can i think i can i think i can and when he was about to row back down the hill he pushed foward and made it over*~ yay again again again hehe
Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Saturday, January 4 2003, 10:32 am

Jim and Ashley

If you want to find the forum, get onto the page where Dreamer lists this weeks poems, and at the bottom it says something like `check out the new message forum' click on it and you will get onto the forum, Hope to see you both there!!
kenny (172.129.159.30) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 10:47 am


i like your poem. you sound lonely... very lonely!!!!
i hear ya. i been there too for 17 years.
Ashley (24.143.29.45) -- Saturday, January 25 2003, 12:06 am


I like your peom
danielle v (138.89.204.134) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 07:33 pm

hope

i hope u dont have to feel the pain that i have felt and the pain i am feeling today. but i like ur peom it is wat i go though every day i want some there for me to i prayer to god that u wont do wat i do everyday b/c it is a sad thing and lonely too. i hope ur life will get better b/c i no mine wont. so if u want to talk my sn is lilsoccerkid161 or Dvanaman1 so if u want to chat
 
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