Author: J.


this is my night fall, an eternal sunset
its been ten years and still no light yet
I still feel my body, its always cold
and throughout these years, i haven't
grown old
I look out the window but don't go outside
I took a step out but ended up back inside
I got a crucifix but God don't hear my prayers
it's been so long since I've had enough faith to care

this is my nightfall, this is my sunset
my body has died, but my soul ain't done yet

what am I waiting for? its been another year
I never found a way out, I guess I'm stuck in here
I look out the window it's still night time
its been stuck that way since like 1999
I'm losing my feelings, I'm losing my memories
a sea of numbness keeps washing over me
no one in sight, no one to hear me scream
God I hope this isn't what it seems to be


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