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Rewind
26 October, 2002
Author: J.

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this cut from you, that scars on me
the cycle repeated endlessly
i bleed for you, you ignore me
old wounds reopened constantly
you're killing me, im losing you
i suffocate at all of this untrue
blood runs down, the words run through
i'd believed in me through you

ain't losing nothing but time
in you, i had a chance to rewind

you stab deep to peel my layers away
take a look inside, survey this decay
all of this time led up to this day?
how can you just turn and walk away?
the future now just broken dreams
nothing is as it seems
with you i'd just forget about everything
but how can i fly with broken wings?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.78) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 06:59 am

That One Line...

"You stab deep, to peel my layers away..."
Wow. That line stabs deep and true.
shery (152.163.252.38) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:30 am

o my god

this is uch a beautiful poem
i enjoy writtin poems but i never really felt one of my poems as i am feelin your
i love the way u express yourself wow
 
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