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Good And Evil
20 October, 2002
Author: J.

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parasites that suck the flesh
burning darkness heaves in your chest
insects swarm and multiply
a kalediscope for blinded eyes
turn to face what you might find
a thousand tounges that burn the mind
hallowed walls illuminate
burning steel eviserates
seven sins that stained your life
fuels the fire that feeds the strife
candied flesh that feeds the smoke
forever night, and eternal life to burn and choke
serpent sings a song of pain and hunger
laughing at the light watch your life go under

save me
the light is burning my eyes
save me
the darkness isn't far behind

with tears in my eyes
i look to the blue skies
im not afraid to cry
i've said all my goodbyes
angels lead me to a better place
streets of gold and sunshine on my face
i did the best i could with my life
now im forever free from constant strife
i don't regret all the pain
all the sacrifice of personal gain
clouds are melting around me
paradise as far as these eyes can see
I've waited so damn long for this day
finally all my sins are washed away

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Stacey (68.82.127.64) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 12:14 am

Great Poem!!

I like the way you're so descriptive. First line really grabbed my attention. (gave me the hee-bee-jee-bee's)
Keep up the good work!
~Stace
J. (209.214.52.22) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 04:37 am

Stacey

thanks and stuff:)... this poem is in song form on the digital 13 cd... you can check it out on our site and stuff... http://www.geocities.com/vgmillenium... yup...
Seizure (68.155.218.237) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 07:12 am

alternative Stacy

Or you could just download that song at:

http://www.mp3.com/digital_13/

And not sift through that the BS that is our site. (I did a really poor job putting it together by the way).
J. (209.214.52.153) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 06:10 am

POS

yes.. the site does suck midget nipples...
LinzAy (209.240.198.63) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 06:49 am

LOL

Midget Nipples and sad panda......ur hilarious! Yea...i heard that song last nite...its real good and i heard the other two too....theyre awesome too!
Seizure (68.155.218.237) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 09:03 am


Glad you liked the songs. (edited)
candice lee (165.199.3.42) -- Thursday, October 9 2003, 05:20 pm

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um.. i'm doing a project and i would like to use your poem. to guide me is that o.kay??
Tiffany (97.92.52.104) -- Wednesday, August 26 2009, 02:58 am

huh

so this is a song and not a poem???? so why would you put it as a poem then? just askin... i mean it good real good but if its a song its not your poem then.... just askin....
LinzAy (65.33.165.99) -- Friday, August 28 2009, 11:51 pm

obviously....

So, it seems somewhat obvious to me...or pretty obvious actually...that although this may not be considered a poem in his eyes because they create music it IS something he wrote and wanted to share.

Think about it.
 
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