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Lonely
2 March, 2003
Author: Jason Qualls

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I hunger to feel your touch
Tears i bleed hurt so much
i journey alone in a world of loneliness
no one to hold me
i feel so lonely
in my time of need
i crave you to hold me so tenderly
I journey this world lost and lonely
emptiness draining my life
drowning me in darkness
i feel your love so warm to the touch
i cradle your love
hunger for your touch
hopelessness draining my heart
getting worse through the years
loneliness hurting I bleed the tears
please rain love upon me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, March 7 2003, 06:15 pm

that was a very nice poem

keep it up
Andrew (208.254.109.22) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 07:03 pm

Hurt

I feel the same way in the poem. Ive loved this girl for so long and weve become best friends but thats about it.
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 01:03 pm

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Very Heartfelt.I think poetry is lanscape of our emotions...the heart is the window.this poem reminds me of a song...and it reminds me of a very painful experience which prompted me to write: "FULL MOON" and "COMVERSATIONS".....GREAT WRITING
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 06:03 am

Another Awesome One!

Hey! another awesome one, i see! g'job! another one, to make me feel like i did, feeling resentment for not having a love of my own...anyway, i wrote sum ones when i felt like that, but jus' came to say, AWESOME JOB!! n.n ttyl!!
 
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