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Twisted Thoughts
Author: Babygurl

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Twisted thoughts
Twisted Dreams
Life is never what it seems
Come in my world
Come in my mind
Memories I'll leave behind
All the hurting
All the pain
Now I know Im going insane
I can't breath
I can't see
Why was I chosen to be me
The world is spinning way to fast
A sense of reality I can't even grasp
Pain draining from my mind
Loosing all my sense of time
Twisted thoughts day by day
Will they ever go away
All my walls are closing in
Insane crazy til the end

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 07:58 pm

like it

Hey good poem you deffinitly sparked some attention there! Keep writting.
LinzAy (209.240.198.61) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 11:37 pm

Woa...

Hey Gurl..that was good! I liked it a lot!
Luc (67.36.176.16) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:06 am

no title

i liked it a lot. went over it a couple of times. "loosing all my sense of time" loved that line.
Luc (67.36.176.16) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:08 am

typo

i wrote in time i know i meant mind. -.- sorry...
Luc (67.36.176.16) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:15 am

um nevermind that last one

ok im just sorta freaking out here. i thought it said mind then i went back and said time so now im just confused so uh you can just ignored me. sorry bout that.
HIgh'De (207.162.163.19) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:56 pm

no tile

you know I think all your poems r great but you also no poems like these you write. I don't like oh and I can say that, NO comments, keep writing.
peace, love, friends 4-life
Babygurl (216.135.36.193) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:10 pm

I know

I know you don't like these kind of poems but oh well I still love ya girl!!!!
Stacey (68.82.127.64) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 07:09 pm

Hey Babygurl

Great poem!! Keep up the good work.
~Stacey
Nikki D (65.43.117.212) -- Wednesday, October 30 2002, 10:40 pm

I Can Relate

I really liked it. I trully can relate.
priscilla (64.158.94.232) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 05:34 am

great

i love this poems i fell the same way its so good and so true i can relate to this wow
jodie owenby (68.112.18.81) -- Wednesday, June 11 2003, 03:32 am

well i have to give some credit

ur poem was okay sumthng i must not say i could love and hate but all i wanna say is its just great.. u tell us ur feelins and how much u care we sit back and listen to all the fear we can hear u have a great poem a great one indeed keep up the good work and mabe u can see love,hate,and peace are all in a beat of ur heart...sweet love jodie
Kim (209.68.98.87) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 06:17 pm

awsome

words cant describe how i felt after i read that.
loz (81.135.50.79) -- Thursday, November 20 2003, 10:16 pm

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sounds like we're sharing one mind, all the words in my head, you put them on paper. amazing
() -- Friday, May 14 2004, 05:00 am


 
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