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Climbing Up A Mountain
Author: Babygurl

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Climbing up a mountain covered in white snow
I'm finally at the top now
Looking down below
The world is beneath me
The sky is above
Searching my soul for unconditional love
You can't run from your problems
They won't disapear
At the top of the mountain
My problems are still here
Believe in yourself
It becomes really clear
If you love yourself
You have nothing to fear

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Comments on this poem/writing:

SMILEY (152.163.189.66) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 11:39 am

Yes!

how wonderful--positive--maybe tell us a beautiful dreamy story of the climb--Well I can see betweem the lines of your poem and climbed that mountain and there is a bit fresh air up there--I made my mountain in my hobbyshop with friends that ponder thoughts as we view the site down on our village--tho this or that we love and fend for one another--I gotta read more of your work--thank you,from Roy
Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 07:51 pm

I agree

I have to agree with Roy on that. Beautiful write.
LinzAy (209.240.198.61) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 06:19 am

Me too

I agree also.
 
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