These Things by John Gibson

These things.
These things come and go
These things don't say hello
These things waste my time
These things I hate and their all mine
These things I speak of are mistakes
These things I make so often
These things I do
These things hurt you
These things punish me
These things make me see
These things piss me off
These things I do not mean
These things they seem.so evil and wrong
These things I have known for all my life
These things I regret
These things I shouldn't have said
These things I shouldn't have done
These things cause me to hurt
These things happen in the words I speak
These things cause others pain,
when they deserve so much more
These things are a flaw
These things made me hurt u
These things I am sorry for

luc (68.74.149.30) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:54 pm

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it was a good poem, but what i didnt really liked about it was the continuals reputition of the words these things. although i guess in some angle it gives it a more deeper meaning, but personally i think you can achieve the same feeling useing the reputition a little more less..

then again this is just my opinion..

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