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One Moretime
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Your voice so gentle as it sooths my world,
Your embrace so secure while holding my world,
Your eyes so trusting I see through your soul,
All this you give to me unconditionally,
In return,
I give you my trust it's who I am,
I give you my strength it will hold us true,
I give you the person I am,
I give you all my tomorrows,
There what I'll become in your world,
I'll give you my love everyday,
I'll care for you in everything I do,
I'll give you my eyes,
Through them you'll see my soul,
I'll give you me,
You made me complete

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.197) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 02:12 am

ON TOP OF THE WORLD

Hey Clive! You're living large! WHen you have a romantic love exchange! You love your girl, and she loves you! What more can you ask for! Hahhahahhaha!
You're definitely on top of the world!!!
Clive (63.184.97.252,) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 06:59 am

ummm

these are my words, these are my hopes, one day will be my life ................. I hope
Terrie* (65.135.86.85) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 05:44 pm

Clive,

WOW! very impressive...ALL your work tells us that you are a very loving and talented man..this poem is echoeing w/personality /charisma and soooo much love lingering on each word...you are remarkable. you have truely been touched by the love bug..all woman wish that same desire..keep your eyes/heart open, your love might be there waiting around the corner..waiting to share that life w/you...Good Luck & God Bless!!!
Always, Terrie*
Tammy (66.38.6.7) -- Sunday, March 28 2004, 12:20 am

Clive

This is a beautiful poem....You write with so much beauty, and love in your work. This is truely wonderful!!!!
 
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