vinebar

Daddy
Author: Jorjette

vinebar

Your always there to yell at me
But the anger never lasts for long
Sometimes you know your right
so eventually
I have to admit I'm wrong
Sometimes we just sit there
And have a good old talk
Other times we need to think things over
so we have our little walk
I always love your hugs and kissers
Though I know its hard for me to show
Don't ever forget how much I LOVE YOU
That I will always know
Sometimes i get angry
But I hate to start a fight
Even when I know your wrong
where's the evidence that i'm right
we always seem to work things out
that's The best thing I LOVE bout you
Cause you always have the answers
and you say the right things
when i'm blue

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Brittany (24.161.157.171) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 05:00 pm

Same here

My daddys is the same way. Hi. I am 12 years old and I love my daddy more than anyone. He has never grounded me and he never has to. I get in trouble sometimes but he doesn't punish me because he knows I can't live with guilt so I end up saying sorry and keeping the guilt rather than being punished and forgeting about it. He is the funniest person! Anyways, wish you luck---Brittany
joyce ivy (68.19.179.151) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 07:33 pm

JORJETTE..WELL WRITTEN

your words touched my heart deeply. your poem was so well written. from your heart.Aren't dads great. keep writing love your work. joyce
Arielle (68.85.232.151) -- Saturday, December 18 2004, 02:55 am

Very Good

your poem was very well written i loved it it was most enjoyable to read i know my dad is exactly they same. so good
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Jorjette

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.