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Sister
Author: Jorjette

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I woke up the other day
Thinking everything was fine till I was told
Your life was at the end of the line
The face of your doctor
Looking like it was his fault
She was 4 and a half and will never be an adult
Tears were arriving
Finding them hard to disappear
There was a wish for you to be near
Maybe it was meant to be
But How when you died
I sat in the hospital for hours trying not to cry
There are memories of us I would never let leave
And the last laugh I heard
And the last hug that I recieved !

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tiffany (165.138.53.21) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 06:10 pm

sad

this poem was really sad.
joyce ivy (68.19.179.151) -- Thursday, October 21 2004, 07:28 pm

JORJETTE..SUCH SORROW

I am sorry for your loss..like you i have been touched by the death of my mother and grandmother last month..so i know your pain well...they say time will heal your heart...for that i am still waiting...i am here if you need someone to talk to...your poem is very touching...keep writing...it helps....
your friend
joyce
 
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