A Samurai Spirit
9 January, 2004
Author: Josh
A star dims slowly
He forsakes his teachings
Drawing on rage, he unsheathes his spirit
Lashing at his enemies, he focuses on his nemesis
At last, the time has come
The immortal conflict ensues
Their spirits, equally powered
Their bodies mangled
The nemesis falls in defeat
Sheathing his spirit, he looks upon the destruction
The death
The sadness
The pain
The sorrow
He falls in submission as he weaps apology
Begging forgiveness, he slowly stops weaping
A star fades out
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Tarna (66.72.30.139) -- Monday, January 12 2004, 02:08 pm It's easy to feel his spirit as he weeps for the fallen. Great poem. |
| Josh (207.69.90.26) -- Tuesday, January 13 2004, 12:58 am Thank you :) |
| pickle_man (24.78.242.63) -- Thursday, February 12 2004, 02:17 am I LUV SAMURAIS AND U HAVE CAPTURED EM PERFECTLY! |
| samurai guy (24.78.242.63) -- Thursday, February 12 2004, 02:26 am ummmmmm u spelt weep wrong |
| Cristina (216.127.129.34) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 12:29 am Reisner |
| Reisner (216.127.129.34) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 12:30 am Pickman |
| tiff (216.54.14.84) -- Thursday, April 1 2004, 05:00 pm This poem leaves me speechless |
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