vinebar

These Few Words
Author: Julia

vinebar

these few words
I have to say to you,
mean so much to me,
because I know they are true.
You said them to me,
a few months back,
but I didn't return them,
It was my stupidy holding me back,
I just want you to know,
I feel the same way for you,
as you felt for me
I love you from the bottom of my heart
If you feel the same way
we shall never be apart
If you don't feel the same way
tell me straight up.
but remember
I will always be here for you,
I will be your friend through
thick and thin.
I'll be there for you
In the end

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

XoForeverXo (141.149.132.52) -- Monday, June 2 2003, 12:31 pm

no title

Aww...I definitely can relate to this one! Simply beautiful! i love it! keep writing! xoxo
Xeracy (204.113.161.187) -- Monday, June 2 2003, 02:26 pm

no title

These words sound creepily familiar. It seems like something one of my old friends did with basicly the exact same words. I like the poem even though it is kinda sad.
Amber/Damia (209.214.197.13) -- Wednesday, June 11 2003, 03:16 am

hey

Hey, Julia, It's just me dropping in to say that you have great poems. Keep writing and post more of your poems. They are great and touching.
Mary (24.173.21.68) -- Wednesday, October 8 2003, 04:08 pm

don't hide it

Julia look when you have feelings it better to tell that person straight up and dont wait because sometimes you won't have another chance.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Julia

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.