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Vengence
Author: Justus Isaiah Richardson

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Did you think you'd get away with it?
Did you think I'd just forget?

You did it right in front of me!
Do you think I didn't see?

Or did you think me someone other,
Than the kid who saw you rape his mother?

Ah, in your eyes there's recognition,
Like you'd seen some apparition.

Have you guessed why I have come here?
Is that why I smell your fear?

Can you sense I'm going to kill you?
That there's nothing you can do?

As I chop you into pieces,
Your chance to live decreases.

What I plan for you is grim.
I will cut off every limb.

Then I'm gonna pluck out your eyes,
Long before your body dies.

And I will slice and dice your groin,
Make you feast on your own loins.

So, you'd best say your final prayer.
Though I really just don't care.

I plan to slowly take your life.
And cut you up with my knife.

Cause I still hear my mother's cry.
Now it's time for you to die.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mark Spencer (152.163.188.226) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:29 am

What's gotten into you?

Wow! That was dark. I hope you're not writing from experience.

Rev. Mark Spencer
Justus Isaiah Richardson (198.81.26.107) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 09:23 pm

Do you really wanna know?

I read a couple of poems that got me back in touch with some old demons. I'm just trying to get them out by writing them down.

Justus
Mark Spencer (205.188.208.168) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 09:56 pm

These kinds of demons must be purged.

Keep writing Justus.

Rev. Mark Spencer
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:06 pm

Justus...

Awsome! I hope this isnt form exerience. But if it is it caused you to write an AWSOME poem!!!!!!!
Justus Isaiah Richardson (172.144.121.118) -- Monday, May 12 2003, 12:08 pm

Mark And Leah together again!

Once again It's Mark and Leah who bravely go where the faint of heart fear to tread. Thanks guys. I like and respect you both, and your opinion matters to me. I've tested your mettle and found you to be solid blocks of steal in a sea of aluminum foil. In other words, you got guts, when most everyone else is running for cover.
Afraid of the boogie man or Mr. Hyde. All I have to say to that crowd is......Boo!

Justus
nick (200.206.215.93) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 07:53 pm

SWEET!

Thanks allot for this poem it helped me in school!
keep on writing...
U rox!
chloe (165.146.100.16) -- Thursday, February 17 2005, 02:13 pm

dark but satisfying

Wow havent seen a poem like that before its probably the words a killer would use in his mind but it is very satisfying to see that most people, no matter what, think alike.
 
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