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A World Of Hurt
Author: Justus Isaiah Richardson

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I know you've had your eyes on,
That far away horizon,
There are things you say you want to do.

You've said you'd like to wander,
But I think you'd better ponder,
The words Iím about to say to you.

There's a world of hurt,
Just outside that door.
You better think it over,
Or I won't be here anymore.

There's no time for second thoughts,
Or don't you know the score?
Thereís a world of hurt,
Waiting just outside that door.

A chip is on your shoulder,
The fear of getting older,
You say you'd like to try something new.

Iíve felt what you are feeling,
I know it seems appealing,
But don't forget what I said to you.

There's a world of hurt,
Just outside that door.
You better think it over,
Or I won't be here anymore.

There's no time for second thoughts,
Or don't you know the score?
Thereís a world of hurt,
Waiting just outside that door.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (205.188.209.8) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 06:32 am

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Like the rythym it has going...good writing Justus
CrYsTaL (206.214.67.160) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 09:05 pm

I agree

Exactly what LinzAy said, nice rhythym...like a song!
luc (68.74.123.135) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 10:56 pm

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i liked it.. good writing..
 
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