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Grape Soda
Author: Justus Isaiah Richardson

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How much do I love you?
Let me count the ways,
And let the world know,
Why I sing your praise.

I love the way you grab me,
When your cap is sprung.
And how you just explode,
With flavor on my tongue.

I love to press my lips,
Gently to your mouth.
And feel the way you quiver,
As you flow to the south.

I penetrate your shell,
Drink deep of what’s inside.
As we become as one,
With nothing left to hide.

And so because I love you,
And love the way you taste,
You will stay my grape soda,
And never be replaced.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 08:29 am

to Justus

cute ... (smile)
Mark Spencer (152.163.188.231) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 10:38 pm

Wow Justus, you really LOVE grape soda!

I see you decided to write the grape soda poem you spoke about. Interesting sexual overtones you managed to weave into it.

Mark
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 11:05 pm

Justus...

Wow, that was really good! I liked it! Nice writing!
Brandi (64.12.96.47) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 11:20 pm

awesome!!

i liked how u made grape soda like a person in its own way yet also a drink, very creative
Elizabetta (198.81.26.112) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 01:39 am

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I see you point..:) though my you probably find my writing superficial as well...I do see your point
Justus Isaiah Richardson (205.188.209.7) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 12:16 pm

Thanks guys!

Yeah, this one means a lot to me.
 
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