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Pain
12 October, 2002
Author: Kara Stadel

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You've inflicted me with pain again
Down my face come tears and then

I wait as I slowly die
You'll never know why I cry

My wounds split open, they'll never heal
You'll never know how bad I feel

The fires of hell reach out for me
My precious face you'll no longer see

You look at me, your faces with horror
My cold pale face will be no more

The pain you've caused was so strong
My beating heart is forever gone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.232.186) -- Thursday, November 14 2002, 01:27 am

wow

that was really good. i loved it! "The fires of hell reach out for me My precious face you'll no longer see" <---really liked that line.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 12:08 am

Good

A very descriptive poem - I liked it !
Oedipus (24.98.156.7) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 09:25 am

Amazing

A very informative poem which gets your point across. Nice Work!!!!
 
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