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Killing Me Inside
12 November, 2002
Author: Kara Stadel

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Now my heart slowly dies
I crawl in bed and then I cry

As I lay there my flesh burns
You've made me nothing, that's what I've learned

The tears I shed wil never leave
Breaking my heart, you did achieve

You'll never be able to understand
That I've plaed my heart within you hand

My sould now dies at your feet
My heart wil soon have its last beat

I'm worthless now because of you
Without you here, what will I do?

Hate is now the emotion inside
I hope you happy that I've now died

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.232.186) -- Thursday, November 14 2002, 01:28 am

hmmm

love your poems. keep writing. ^.^
arjun (165.95.245.43) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 02:27 am

touching

i could almost relate it to myself, the only diff is i am not dead yet:). nice
Oedipus (24.98.156.7) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 09:31 am

Very Single Minded

I am filled with sorrow and my heart aches for you, but what is the other side of the storey......
kiaira (68.22.29.182) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 05:17 pm

touching

well you will overcome it dont let no one put you in that type of place again
jade (68.22.29.182) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 05:18 pm

4 real

this boy named ant got me jade syfax had me felling that way .
Taneka (68.22.29.182) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 05:20 pm

loving

my baby kevonne aka popie who i love got me filling like that no matter what he is my baby
Brandi (168.11.88.66) -- Monday, May 5 2003, 06:45 pm

EXCELLENT!!!

That was a good and touching poem that I'm sure many people can relate to... I know I do.
LinzAy (64.12.96.170) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 05:30 am

''''''

Great writing...
Stone Heart (66.144.56.87) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 04:32 pm

I know how you fill

That poem reminded me of my ex Chelsea Kelly see broke my heart and changed me deeply.
jozee (67.75.177.100) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 10:15 pm

i know how you fell

i've seemed to have that same problem everysingle day
hope (24.54.161.40) -- Sunday, March 21 2004, 05:00 am

not bad

cute not bad i am a poet and i think that was not bad at all my advice to you Wrinte About sadness and killing yourself & suicide they are the best kins of poems
hope (24.54.161.40) -- Sunday, March 21 2004, 05:00 am

not bad

cute not bad i am a poet and i think that was not bad at all my advice to you Write About sadness and killing yourself & suicide they are the best kinds of poems
moe (156.63.242.4) -- Tuesday, March 30 2004, 04:15 pm

well....

i wouldnt say i know how you feel but i did like the poem very creative and i feel as if you put your mind into it. like you really tried. very well done.
 
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