Lucid Visions
Author: Keiko


Having my lucid visions taking over
Time after time more real they become
Can't be controlled, overpowering my senses
Standing alone in a circle of stars
each one has a name, a memory, a scar
all cursed by my actions
Not leaving, they form part of me
i awake! i look he's standing still infront of me
Judging my every move, he stays away
as if there is a barrior holding us apart
Tears are being form
Questions are asked "Why won't you talk?"
Why won't you come near me?
Starting to fall I cry outloud
I yell his name I call the Sky
no answers are there
my lonely echo slowly fades
i feel his presence i feel his pain
but i dont understand why he would feel ashamed
My Tears are falling more and more
in my mind like a river it flows to remind me of the pain
Like a shooting star
Flying across the night sky
standing out amongst all things
Why do u have to be this way?
You just ignored me when i was there
As if i was dead, a stranger, a no one
Well now i am
Are u happy, or are u sad?
Did you ever care?
i hear your crys from the midnight sky
Up ubove i hear all your pain
I cry too knowing
Look up at the sky you'll see my tears
marked forever to remind u of my mistakes
The shooting stars flying above in the blue sky


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