Innocent Eyes
27 August, 2003
Author: Keila
Her innocent eyes so full of expression
as she slowly gets older
gets more cold
sad
depressed
on the outside, pretending everythings perfect
inside, shes dying
no-one understands
shes misunderstood
caught up in the real world
in constant daydreams
she resides
keeps herself to herself
trusting no-one
doubting everyone
writing, drawing.......existing
all in a constant days work
in this unhappy song
she sings lead vocal
in this unhappy play
she plays lead role
she dies
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Martin Vann (67.28.88.80) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 02:46 pm Keila, The poem is very good, sad, but the work is excellent and descriptive. We probably, have all known someone like this, sometimes its their mood, sometimes, it is their life, we need to be their friends and share our good fortunes. MartinV P,S. Think I've said this before,but, Keila is very pretty name. |
| Keila (195.93.32.8) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 04:53 pm thank you for the comments!!! I happen to hate my name, but...oh well.... |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 11:41 pm I really like your poem! Nice work! |
| keila (195.93.32.8) -- Friday, August 29 2003, 08:50 pm thank you! |
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