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My Pain In The Broken Silence
27 August, 2003
Author: Keila

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Theres silence around me, filling the air
I care enough now not to care
My silent screams, my invisible tears
lost inside, consoling my fears
im twitching madly, im sitting too still
im running up this downward hill
the doctors operating to keep me dead
they accuse me of speaking to my self in my head
im running too slow, yet walking too fast
watching all the people as they passed
i'll build the door to make my escape
after writing this, I'll never awake

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Comments on this poem/writing:

keila (195.93.33.11) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 04:57 pm

hmmm

I think the last line in this would be better as: and from this dream, I'll never awake...oh well
nadine (124.178.53.8) -- Sunday, August 16 2009, 12:50 am

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wow your peoms are great :)
ihave an english assignment and was wondering if i could please, please use your poems :)
 
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