The Voices In My Head by Keila

do this, do that, do this, do that, do this
is there something that i missed?
my heads spinning round and round
searching for answers, screaming as theyre found
im so confused by what you do
can you tell me whats wrong with you?
evry thing i do, you say is wrong
im a misfit, i dont belong
but then i stop and think of you
and realise that none of this is true
youre not real, too weak to fight
youre just a voice in the night

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, December 15 2003, 09:43 pm

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This poem was great, I absolutely loved it. I like stories/poems that are like this, they're so much fun. Good job and keep it up***** -Trina

Silkened Moon (206.214.66.34) -- Tuesday, December 16 2003, 01:08 am

How Fantastic and Simple is this Poem?!
Awesome poem Kaycee! I thought this poem was very cute and simple in its own way. I always think that have this type of way to aspire in a poem are the sort of people you'd think were meant to write fantasies and such. I really enjoyed this poem, it brought a lot of happiness to me! Keep writing, you're a natural!

Stardustz (219.65.207.152) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 06:50 pm

Visions of Fairies
Nice poem! It is simple and yet has the elements of fantasy!Keep writing!I am a new member to this site so do check out my work too.

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