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Giving In
Author: KitKatrina

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Iím giving up,
Not coming back,
Forget this life,
Itís all such crap,
Iíve tried so hard,
To always be,
The kind of person,
Thatís not like me,
Iíve cried too much,
Iíve lost the same,
And thereís no one,
I can really blame,
Friends arenít helping,
Itís what they made,
But Iíve given love,
Itís not a fair trade,
Give love to receive,
Just one thing,
You know what I got?
They gave me pain,
So forget it now,
Iím just giving in,
I donít care anymore,
For the crap I'm in,
They say they donít care,
But what if I died,
Would they care then?
And wish they had tried?
Well then watch me,
Iím saying goodbye,
Thereís no use for life,
So I might as well dieÖ

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Choker (24.239.89.85) -- Sunday, July 2 2006, 02:57 pm

damn

I think its f***ing true. Sad, but true.
 
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