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Hammered To The Cross
Author: KitKatrina

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He hammered in the nails,
Each one he did it slow,
He didnít even care,
Heíd never let me go,
I was made sure to feel the pain,
To feel the every hit,
I am going to die,
I can feel that this is it,
He singes my hair,
To scare me best he can,
He puts the fire out,
Right before I am,
My legs bleed substantially,
My head burns in desire,
I can feel the burning,
I am the core of the fire,
I donít know if I can make it,
He keeps on torturing me,
Everything that he is doing,
Is slowly setting me free,
My body becomes weightless,
My pain is no longer here,
I feel like I am floating,
Itís like Iíve disappeared,
He gets ready to finish me off,
Making sure I felt the pain,
I can still see the fire,
My body stuck in the flame,
He thinks he is hurting me,
But he is making me stronger,
Itís not my time to die,
I am going to live much longer,
I get up off the cross,
In which he nailed me on,
The flame is going out,
The pain is already gone,
I take the sharpened knife,
Stab him over and over again,
Making sure he feels the pain,
The pain he put me in,
I nail him to the cross,
Watch him bleed and watch him cry,
I wait until the last minute,
Until Iíve seen myself dieÖ

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem can be confusing if you don't pay attention to what is really happening.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LCN (67.30.22.84) -- Monday, December 29 2003, 03:50 am

Outstanding!!!

You have such a way with words. I have just read every single poem you have posted here. You have such a talent. I love this poem. It is by far my favorite. Keep up the good(excuse me, great) work.
Kayla (24.198.171.105) -- Sunday, May 22 2005, 01:18 am

Crazy

I dont know why but this is like my most favorite poem ever .. i read it over and over again and each time i feel i understand it a bit more.. its just so mysterious.. I Love It! you deffinetly have talent
 
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