Author: Kodi


She slowly drowns in a sea of depression.
Her chest constricts and she cant breath.
She fights to break the surface.
She can only think of one thing

She has no other choice.
Mom is in her on world.
Lost in a sea of drugs.

Doctor doesn't believe her.
She slowly going crazy.
But no gives her a second thought.

Her mom doesn't wanna be seen as a failure.
So she pretends that she never went wrong in the things she chose.
So she tries to hide her daughter who is crying for help.

The hospital calls.
She's drowning worser now.
Her mom still pretends.

She's cutting worser now that she's in.
She strapped to the bed.
The only way to live it seems.
Now she's not eating.
She slowly dieing.
Her soul has been long dead though.

Finally the world is fading.
The depression is choking her.
Peace fills her.


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Kodi-Leigh ( -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 12:39 am


the poem was good i have never met anyone with the same name spelling as me are you a girl or a guy?? just wondering!!!
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