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Sweet Sensations
6 November, 2000
Author: Kristen

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Sweetest of all would be
to burrow into the fervent
tunnels of your mind,
to suck on your flow of images
'til saturated, filled
from within my emptiness with
words of vision perfectly whole.

Your caverns drip satiating honey phrases,
bitter blended in electric shock wine.
Time runs back and in circles
rhyming with itself--multiply
endless seeking and I will follow,
eyes seared with your too much seen,
but moistened with lapping aqua
pale from stalatites borne
in imagination's core.

If time is not and more than herself here, why not
play with reality's matte 4 by 6 staticity?
I cannot take in the unbridled growth;
yet this cool labrynth needs not full
exploration. I need not
lay you bare to the core of consciousness
to bite your heart of thought, drink freely.

It lays exposed and throbbing,
brilliant hue of red
and sweet taste of round,
at the very depth of beginning's
pool of finality. Dive into
silver green essence (slap),
and meet me there to taste
your Self in me....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Rob () -- Wednesday, September 19 2001, 03:55 am

To My Own Personal Dreamer

Hey K,
I'm almost crying, it feels so long since I heard your words and to be honest I guess that in my travels I haven't held you as close as I should have. I've missed you. How is your beautiful family? Strong I hope. Close I hope. Still shining in your words like small stars and gentle gods.
I miss you.
I love you.

Take care,
Rob
xox
Jim (172.147.19.193) -- Saturday, October 19 2002, 01:31 am

HOW EROTIC!!!!

Kristen, you are either very frustrated or in love with Mr. perfect. I suspect you are in love or were in love with Rob... Very erotic and colorful, its like the eruption of a virgin volcano..good luck
mental (66.153.207.54) -- Sunday, October 20 2002, 12:23 am

mental's comment

hey jim i know what's it all about.
Stace (68.82.126.206) -- Sunday, March 9 2003, 07:54 pm

Holy ****

Kristen, <BR>
That is one of the most sensual things i have ever read. I think you are truely talented. Your words are absolutely beautiful.<BR>
~ Stace
mental (66.153.165.62) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 02:08 am

hi

yes have read, fever runs elegantly through me. with feelings that i cant ignore.
 
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