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25th Ave. North
Author: Kyle Holcombe

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with windows in houses watching me
like eyes from an old man's soul
and the chill from the air
seeping through the steering wheel
i shiver and pretend i don't notice
i pretend anything but this

and i've got a mind to scream
i've got a mind to cry for you
if i thought they wouldn't hear me
i'd sob your name into my thumb
and pretend anything but this.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (204.112.169.60) -- Sunday, January 2 2005, 02:23 am

Awesome Work!

I LOVE your writing!! Seriously, I just wish this poem was longer and that you had more! If you get this comment keep posting! I really like the style that you write in....thanx for the enlightning poem
joyce ivy (68.19.188.121) -- Sunday, January 2 2005, 05:47 pm

very good

very well written...keep sharing...joyce
Laraine Smith (209.132.169.171) -- Thursday, September 17 2009, 06:38 pm

:(

My heart breaks for you.
 
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