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So Frickin Tired
Author: Leah

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I want to go to sleep
but i cant
and it looks like writing this poem
is the only way im going to get to relax
its 2 am and im so damn tired
but with this nasal and throat infection i cant sleep
i am so frickin tired and fed up
i cant breathe or eat
i hate it it sux

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shiloh (66.24.30.65) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 11:51 am

excellent

sometimes the simple words make the most impact... you have given a concrete piece of everyday life here that most can relate to, and hardly anyone ever considers worth paying attention to, other than to mentally note they feel unwell. the lines hit because they are real, they are not coached or designed or planned - they are just exactly what you were thinking as you hit the keys... perfect - this is the kind of stuff that life is about, and it is worth reading because it is about the common things in life, the things no one ever talks about or writes about. excellent. ...peace...shiloh
joyce ivy (68.222.84.217) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 01:56 pm

Leah

Know how you feel Leah...sometimes I can't sleep..lol a lot of times I can't...right now it's a cold but most of the time it's the thought's inside my head...so I write...some times a little crazy..from no sleep but I do it anyway..it helps me to relax....hope your felling better..and I agree with Shiloh...sometimes the simplest words make the most impact...thanks...
 
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