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New York
Author: Leah

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New York city so far away
but hey you know what
I'm gonna go there someday
the big city lights are calling my name
sounds weird
but thats what i crave
This girl has big dreams and they are going to come true
I can smell that New York air
Feel it blowing through my hair
I'm gonna go there someday!!!!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 07:20 am

Time's Square, Broadway, City Lights....

You've got me believing that you're on your way there, Leah! I like the straight forwardness of this work. I can sense your determination and excitement in your words. So, please, give my regards to old Broadway while you're there and don't forget us little people, okay? Oh, and a postcard would be cool, too! Ha! Ha! Haaa! Thank you for the poem and sharing your dream!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 07:46 am

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thanx ben........alot
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 11:35 pm

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Leah, I feel the exact same way. I have this dreams too, just making it somewhere. And I believe you will go there someday just keep faith in yourself and you can do anything....absolutely ANYTHING..Great job.
Leah (66.222.217.200) -- Sunday, November 16 2003, 06:11 am

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your so right i can do anything thanx for reminding me!
 
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