Joyful Pain
18 September, 2003
Author: Leah
I laughed with you so hard
That my face turned blue
I just laid there paralised
What else could I do??
You were laughing
But nothing came out
Was I going to make it through?
This, I began to doubt
You were literally red in the face!
You NEEDED air
I wanted to help you
But all I could do was stare
I had to look away
I just HAD to escape!
Before I ran out of air
This was my one true fear
I made it to the door
Tripping on the floor
With horrible stomach cramps
I couldnt stop laughing I needed to get away
Was I going completely insane?!!?
Everything seemed funny
Even the shadow of your face
I started to cry
From laughing so hard
I finally caught my breathe
At last........I could rest....
Oh no here I go again
Somebody help help!
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Tarna (63.65.187.71) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:39 am sounds like a good case of the giggle fits.. Very descriptive almost had me laughing too :) |
| Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:55 am Leah, This is GOOD work! I really, really LIKE this poem! It did make me laugh out loud. I could just see it! Joyful Pain is a very good title, too! Oh, oh, oh it hurts sooooo good! Stoooop! Ha! Ha! Haaaaaaaa! Oh, I can't TAKE anymore! {( : ~ D )== Thank you for making me laugh, and I will be HAPPY to read your poems in the future! |
| Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:01 am Yeah me and a goof friend of mine use to have this problem sometimes it would hit us in public places and believe me that is not good! |
| Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:01 am lol i mean good friend not goof friend but hey that kinda fits too |
| KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Saturday, November 8 2003, 12:38 am This was absolutely hilarious. I was laughing as I read on. Me and my friend had problems laughing for no reason at all and we would become red in the face and have stomach cramps from laughing too hard. Good times is all I can say. ha ha. thanks for sharing this great poem. and yes, good title... |
| Bipedalguy (4.156.108.51) -- Friday, January 19 2007, 06:50 am I really liked the poem, and I have had uncontrolled episodes of laughter myself. I was watching a routine on S.N.L. that got me laughing so hard that I finally had to leave the room. I probably wouldn't have made it if I had stayed, and watched the whole scene. |
| shan (65.29.54.133) -- Monday, January 22 2007, 02:32 pm i LOVED it!!!! great read! |
| barb (67.58.201.188) -- Monday, January 22 2007, 03:06 pm A poem about laughter nice and positive good way to start my morning reading this thanks. |
| Leah (24.78.52.116) -- Wednesday, May 28 2008, 05:40 am Lol yeah this poem still makes me laugh..... |
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