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Forsaken Merman
Author: Leah

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I'm just sitting here
trying to make a good poem
what will it be about?
I don't really know
I'll just go with the flow
I'll try to make some rhymes
will anyone like my poem
I hope not
cuz that would be weird
kinda like me
does any 1 ever say
oh golly gee?
you know a guy is smart when he admits guys are dumb
when its really cold out
my toes go numb
I can write better
If I really tried
Who will say this poem sucks
its okay you dont have to take my side
I found some 1 who understands me
who can totally relate
He is nice and smart
hey hes no tart
I am though
yeah i am
i better go...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:19 am

,,,

omg this poem is so dumb! i cant believe i posted it oh well lol
Tarna (63.65.187.71) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:26 am

it's out there

Hey Leah , this one seems out there a bit but it shows some of the things going through the mind when you try to think of something to write. Rambling open minds. what poets are made of :)strangely clever
Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 07:55 am

A Big Dumb Guy who.......

Leah, I have got to say that I'm a big, Dumb Guy who sees something in your writing that I like. You have a courage and playfulness and a willingness to jump into a poem with both feet. I like your humor as well. Keep writing!! Thank you!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:00 am

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Thank you after reading your poems Ive been inspired and I will keep writing......
Martin Vann (171.75.221.92) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 01:26 pm

It Works For Me

Leah,

Every thought has a place,every word has a room, a place where it can find a home. Dreamersreality is a very big place, with lots of room for all your words. Poems don't hvet to ryhme, they don't have to even make sense, like some I write. A thought shared here,is a gift of privacy, thanks. Writing should not be a task, its the flow you konw,what you feel at the time, surpise, your poem makes a lot of sense,fresh and honest, many hiddien qualities here.

MartinV
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:15 pm

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than you Martin
 
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