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A Wish
Author: Leah

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Am I pretty?
Or am I not?
I thought I knew
But I forgot
When I look in the mirror
What do I see?
Who can this weird brown eyed girl be?
Her eyes are so hollow
Her faith so shallow
Yet her dreams are still there
So low on confidence
Trying hard to smile
This girl wants to be a singer
She knows this can never happen
To never hear the clappin'
Of the audience she'll never see
But yet how could that be??
She knows one day thats what shell have to do!
Only time will tell what part of this girl is really true!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.115.52) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 01:27 am

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i liked the ending.. i am a big fan og good endings and i realy liked yorus.. good writing.. this poem is diffeitnly one that will stick with me.. :)
Leah (24.72.92.94) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 07:53 pm

thanx

Im glad some 1 like my poems! thanx for commenting. I guess i could say its encouraging,...
Leah (24.72.92.94) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 07:53 pm

thanx

Im glad some 1 like my poems! thanx for commenting. I guess i could say its encouraging,...
RinRin (24.25.61.26) -- Wednesday, April 23 2003, 09:57 pm

more encouragement!

don't fret!! follow your dreams no matter what! i liked this poem because it shows so much honesty...great writing, and never give up!
.. (142.59.104.228) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 05:48 am

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thanx rin u really meant your comment i can tell
 
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