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Author: Leah

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say i can do anything
but than you say ill never make it
you tell me to be strong
than say i am a weakling
you confuse me
you make me think that the truth is
ill never accomplish anything
i know u love me
but than why do you let me know you dont believe in me
well ive crubled down finally giving up
the hope i had left is withdrawn

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Comments on this poem/writing:

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 11:31 pm

Leah...

There are people that will tell you you're worthless and that you won't succeed, so when people tell me things like this it makes me want to accomplish whatever I wanted even more. It's like I want to prove to them that they were wrong ya know? So just hold on to that remaining hope you had. Good job...
Leah (65.120.100.41) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 08:41 pm

Your not alone

Everybody gets this pain that for some reason people love to dish out. Personally I think that you should work twice as hard to get the job accomplished, then you rub it in that person's face and show them that you did twice as good!
barb (66.46.241.115) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 04:16 am

the right attitude

I read the comments too and your writing is good and the people that commented have the right attitude. please listen to them . prove everyone that they were wrong You can do it with the right attitude and determination. Wouldn't it be a nice reward to go back and say "See I can make it so there nah nah nah nah.lol good writing keep it up just write from your heart and you'll do ok:)
 
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