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Just A Hug
29 October, 2003
Author: Leah06

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Every day my life gets even harder
I'm so tiered and stressed out
I can't even remember what day it is
I just want to break down and cry
But I know I can't
Because I'm a big girl and I'm supposed to be strong.
I don't know who my friends are anymore
And I can't help but think of who was
Pretending that nothing has changed.
I want my old life back
It was fun and happy
And without complication
It was before the stress
Before the lack of sleep
And way before things got foggy.
Now, I'm always cold
I'm always thinking about the things I've done wrong
And forgetting what was ever done right and done well.
I become numb
And lifeless
Without color
And without a soul.
Someone asked what was wrong
And all I did was cry
She listened to what I had to say
And told me what I needed.
All the doctor ordered
Was a hug
And in that hug
I found myself again

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Gypsy (198.81.26.41) -- Friday, October 31 2003, 12:32 am

hey

i think this looks good. And hun if you need to talk you know im there for you.k?
see ya around
Terrie* (65.148.232.138) -- Friday, October 31 2003, 05:18 pm

Consider yourself hugged...

Sweetie it is ok to be strong no matter ones gender.... and still cry ( crying cleanses out our soul) as for your friends, a great majority of us are here @ dreamers, never focus on the little things that you consider bad , they are so minute....they do not count,do not forget.... there are so many good things in life that you have done that out number that...a warm hug expresses alot with out words...consider yourself hugged...(((Leah06)) in the norm that is what one does for many reasons when we encounter another soul, a hug attached with a smile....we all need that kind of touch to keep us sane...i give/get one from my kids just 'bout every time we see each other (we live in the same house)...thanx for another excellent piece from your heart. Terrie*
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 02:34 am

Terrie*...

Thanks for the hug. Im glad you liked this one. it came out better than i thought. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Leah Kendall
Scroggins (12.232.12.208) -- Monday, November 10 2003, 05:16 am

i totally undersand

hey hey leah, wow, everything (((except the helpful hug in the end))) i can relate too!!! great poem, i loved it
-Dani
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Monday, November 10 2003, 09:20 pm

Scroggins

Hey! Im glad you liked it. Thanks for commeting and reading. Where did you find this site? And my stuff? I dont recall saying anything.... Oh well, let me know! Leah
 
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