Driving down the back roads
The wind in my hair
Gazing at the meadows
With out anger or despair.
The scenery, picture perfect
With it's rugged terrain
It almost seems too fragile
The coming of the rain.
The smell is in the air
As the top goes up
I snuggle next to him
Hot co coca in my cup.
We continue to climb
As the rain turns into sleet
Hitting rapidly on the window
Snow we come to meet.
Turning on the heater
Seeking for some tunes
All we hear is static
Flakes turn into dunes.
Our picture perfect meadow
Warped into a wonderland
Coming back to reality
Book still in thy hand.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 03:48 pm|
you write beautifully...i really enjoy this poem...i love the snow..my husband used to take me to the snow every year for my birthday...thank you for sharing..
|Leah06 (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 07:18 pm|
Thank you so much terrie. I love to write poetry it is everything i hope for and the onlythink i couldent live without. Thanks for reading, and thanks for the comments.
(side note: i entered this poem in a contest at my highschool's library, lets see how it dose!)
|Terrie* (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 07:44 pm|
Sweetie in the music world this would go platinum.....your poem is gonna rock big time at your school library...
|Martin Vann (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 08:18 pm|
To My N,
This has got to be one of your best, guess, you found your star and a new start! Remember this my N., it all came from the same heart! Sometimes, you have to be on the ground, feeling, like you were shot-down, BEFORE YOU LOOK UP!
GOT MY VOTE!
P.S. searching for a tune? Hey, baby, your music is coming through? Rock & Roll!
|Martin Vann (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 08:20 pm|
Have you hear the song, "This one's for the girls?" this poem is a perfect fit.
Okay, got to leave this world of Dreams, got some Williams, that need to be paid.
|Leah06 (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 11:12 pm|
I hope it dose! I am really nervous and they wont tell me untill monday!!!!!!! AHHHH! I dont know if i can wait that long. And, no i have never heard that song. But yes my music will be on Seizures next CD. I am so excited for that too! Check it out if you have the chance, im shure hell be willing to send you all the file of our music!
|Leah06 (188.8.131.52) -- Monday, October 27 2003, 08:12 pm|
I just found out that i got first place for the contest! I am so happy! Thanks so much for readingmy stuff, your comments keep my poems coming.
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, October 27 2003, 09:29 pm|
not for a second did we have any doubts...Ladies And Gentlemen.....just as we always knew Leah takes home the prize once again!...Let's hear it for Leah !...i am so thrilled for you sweetie.... i look forward to reading more of your talented writing in the future...keep that heart flowing so your pen can continue to inspire your pen.....NICE JOB....
|Terrie* (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, October 27 2003, 09:33 pm|
ya know what i meant..sorry for the typo...
"keep those feelings of your heart alive and flowing so your pen can continue to be inspired by it"
|Ben (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, October 27 2003, 10:01 pm|
Congratulations to you!
Congratulations to you!
You look like a poet
You write like one, too!
Hey, Leah06! Good going, Girl! Don't forget us little people, okay? Does this mean you're gonna take us all to Ben And Jerry's for ICE CREAM, I hope? Ha! Ha! Haaaaaaa!
|Leah06 (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 01:31 am|
Well if there is a celebration, you shure will be told. thanks for sticking by me and my writing, i appritiate it and i am happy you are always here for me. thanks again.
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