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Too Far Away
10 September, 2003
Author: Leah06

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Your miles away
From the place i call home
I wish you were here
Yet im all alone.
Surching for answers
I want to see your face
Your across the world
Im in the wrong place.
Ive never met you
Yet I know im in love
I need answers to my questions
From my faith above.
I cant hug you
I cant hold you tight
I cant hold your hand
I cant kiss you good night.
Because your too far away
Too far from me
No matter what they say
We were meant to be.
Dont listen to them
Thay are all wrong
Just follow your heart
I know we belong.
But i cant hug you
I cant hold you tight
I cant hold your hand
And I cant kiss you good night
But im waiting.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.208.60.160) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 06:37 pm

Waiting it always the hard part & often a requirement

Leah06,

Your an intelligent girl and I'm happy to see that you realize, sometimes the only answer is..., You Just Have To Wait. It will come.

Good Work,
UM
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 12:55 am

Uncle Martin!

thanks. im glad you liked it. This is also written as a song for Seizure for "DANK". Im glad you like it as a poem too.
Ben (64.175.70.213) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:04 pm

Some very good lines in.....

Leah06, there are some very good lines in this onel You have a real talent for writing. I enjoy your expression. Keep up the good work! And Thanks!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 11:17 pm

Ben...

Thanks, im glad you think so. Ill try to keep writing but now a days its hard to get the time to. I often find myself writing in my school notebooks and on the back of homework and then get yelled at and loose nmy train of thought. But im trying. Im glad you liked it. And thanks for commenting.
 
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