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Your Eyes
Author: Leah06

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Every time I look into you eyes
I don't only see them looking back at me
But I get lost.
I loose the time
Forget who I am without you
And become helpless.
Can't move
Can't breath
It's like time has stopped.
Feeling venerable
Helpless
Weak.
I can't even look away
Then realize
I don't want to.
Only in your eyes
I forget my pain
Along with my past.
I want to stay there forever
Helpless
In your eyes.
And hope
I will never have
To blink.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Monday, July 28 2003, 07:35 pm

I will never have to.......

You have a lot of talent Leah06! You are just getting better and better. I enjoy your writing. you have a lot of heart in there! Thanks! Oh, yes, I do like this poem!!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 01:56 am

Ben...

Im glad you like this one. It took me secons to write it, it just came out of nowhere. And the only reason i am getting better is because i keep reading everyon elses poems including your oen and its influencing my work! Im glad you like it that much!
 
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